versusnurture: (➵ the barren trees & fields of snow)
Abigail Hobbs ([personal profile] versusnurture) wrote in [personal profile] dinosize 2014-08-14 02:58 am (UTC)

[She agrees. And while there are moments - more lately, coming with increasing frequency since she's been back - that she has lost time, this she can and does pay attention to closely.]

[When he offers the pole, she hesitates only for a moment before taking it. Rote motions. Simple tasks. It's no big deal. It won't hurt her or anyone else, except the fish.]

[She casts the line. She's seen this, both on television and on camping trips, but she's never actually done it. The line falls a little short of her intended target, the slower area, but it's not terrible and it didn't get caught in her hair or anything.]

[Her smile is very small, but it's a human gesture, at least. She glances at Stephen for approval.]


Should I recast it?

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